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Re: New story

Post by Sweepy on Wed Feb 18, 2009 9:37 pm

Freeman "How's your chest Sweepy?"
Sweepy "It hurts as it should, but you guys healed me before it got any worse"
Anger "Who was that girl? Is she the one that saved you from becoming a heartless?"
Sweepy "Ya, her name is Jessica...I have no idea why she was helping Sephiroth"
Freeman "On that note we have to stop him"
Sweepy "Not really, before we left I was talking to Cloud and he said he fought Sephiroth in a dream."
Anger "A dream? Was it a dream or something Sephiroth made to try and finish off Cloud?"
Sweepy "That's what Im thinking....but if what Cloud saw wasnt real then we have to find out where he went next."
Freeman "And what to do once we get there"


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Re: New story

Post by Freeman on Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:57 pm

(Well that clears things up Sweepy)
Freeman: Well whose up for going to Hyrule next. I've always wanted to know if Link could talk.
Anger: First things first how are we going to open the Senkai gate again?
Sweepy: Ummmmm..........


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Re: New story

Post by Sweepy on Thu Feb 19, 2009 8:50 pm

Sweepy "Freeman you need to shout out your Zanpaktou's release command then its name"
Freeman "Right"

(Yes Freeman you have to go back a pg or two so you can remember its release command and its name)

Sweepy "Then point your sword in the direction we want to go and shout 'Unlock this gate'"


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Re: New story

Post by Freeman on Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:11 pm

Freeman: Okay here it gose. Daikin......... unlock gate!
POOF!
Anger: Um... nothing happened
Sweepy: Wait the gate appeared right below us! We're getting suck in!
Freeman: AHHHHHHHHH!!! AHah.. oh we made it.
Anger: yeah there was no need to scream.
Sweepy: welp we're here.
Freeman: Hey I can cleary see the new world.
Anger: Yeah but there's a barrier around it.
Sweepy: Guess we should go to one last world............


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Re: New story

Post by Sweepy on Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:34 pm

Sweepy "But before we go and do that Freeman me and Anger need to teach you a little more about your Zanpaktou"

(Like remembering your Zanpaktou's name...all you did to open the gate was call its release command lol, you need to remember to do both)

Freeman "Where are we going to go to do that?"
Anger "Lets go to my world....theres nothing there anymore...."
Sweepy "Well set up a memorial while were there Anger, how bout that?"
Anger "Sounds like its going to have to be a big memorial....lets put one up next to it for your world."
Sweepy "That....sounds nice, since its not there anymore, it would be good to leave something to remember it by....other than me."
Freeman "Ill set one up for my world too if thats ok Anger"
Anger "Its all fine by me, and my people would probably like the company haha"

Sweepy, Freeman, and Anger laugh together like they havent had for a long time...and its a good thing too, many worlds are falling, and the heroes can only save a few at a time...but the worlds that are saved have a higher chance of surviving now. And when the end comes, when the final battle between light and darkness, maybe the worlds that have been saved will be enough. When the armies of light, all the people on the worlds that are still there and still safe band together on a nameless world against an army of heartless and other things from the dark. Will they truly be enough?

(I threw that in cause the end may or may not be so far away....and I thought it sounded cool XD)


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Re: New story

Post by IF~ Anger on Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:56 pm

(XD) "there's my world right there lets land on it." said Anger "thats your planet! what happened to it its just one part of a planet." said Freeman "o thats because the other side was lost to darkness a long time ago during the war against light and dark. Land over there thats where i live." said Anger "its not that big but its still the hugeist house here howd you get it Anger." said Sweppy "o i diddnt but it i built it." said Anger suddenlly a huge kitana went around Angers throught. "wth" said sweepy and freeman. "stop it Miu. what did i say about carrying weapons. "Big brother your home fianally!" said Miu "big brother?" said freeman and sweepy "yeah this is my little sis shes 7." said Anger "WTH but shes carrying a Katana." said Sweepy "standerd defense unit shes pretty good to takes after her brother Smile" said Anger "in want getting hurt." mocked Sweepy "haha at least i dont blow myself up." said Anger "Son welcome home!." "o hey granpa" said Anger "So watcha doing here." said Angers granddad "o were just here to mount some memorials say wheres the hill where we put our most famous heros?" said Anger "right over there for who is this for." said grandpa "my friends world is that ok with you." said Anger "Sure say hi to your dad and mom for me and take these with you." said grandpa giving Anger some flowers. then the heros started walking up the hill "So wheres you dad and mom Anger?" said Freeman "here they are." said Anger there were two memorials on the ground

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Re: New story

Post by Sweepy on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:37 pm

Sweepy "So they fell in the war?"
Anger "Ya"
Miu "They fought days and days before the shadows got them"
Freeman "Sounds just like you Anger....even if its hopeless youll keep fighting..."
Anger "Ya, I get it from them and my grandpa, he fought in the war too"
Sweepy "Well then Ill pay my respects to your family..."

Sweepy creates a pure white rose that is magical so it will never wilt and never leave the memorial

Miu "Its so pretty..."
Sweepy "Ya, the spot where my world was is just filled with these roses. It was our specialty, my parents were florists not fighters. But they fought in the war on my home too."
Freeman "They must have been really famous on your world."
Sweepy "They were, but only for the few hours after they died....."
Anger "Then your world fell..."
Sweepy "Ya, they got to the heart of my world and corrupted it. The king was killed by his own servents and the shadow spred from the capital."
Anger "Well lets start building, Miu can you go ask grandpa to bring some materials and ask him if he wants to help."
Miu "Ok"


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Re: New story

Post by Freeman on Tue Feb 24, 2009 8:17 pm

(Let's head over to our nobodies for a while)
Wrath: Dang the heroes are getting close to us.
Phantom: Good I can use a challenge.
Handy: Relax Wrath the heroes will never be able to defeat the last darkness. Well not with out this.
(Handy pulls out a golden triangle shard with a red aura around it)
Wrath: WHOA is that the triforce shard of power!
Handy: Yeah I stole it from Ganondorf after Link killed him.
Phantom: Nice! Let me use it.
Handy: Whoa not so fast phantom, We have to use this to make one of the gods of the Triforce into a darkness monster.
Phantom: Fine, but what are we going to do about Link and Zelda. Don't they hold triforce power too?
Wrath: Oh don't worry, I got a plan that will take care of that Twisted Evil ................

(okay let's jump back to the heroes)
The heroes were walking back to Anger's family's house when a magical glitter caught Sweepy's eyes.

Sweepy: Huh? what's this?
Freeman: Hey Sweepy whats with the hold up.
Sweepy: Um I found a letter, and it looks like it's addressed to Anger.
Anger: Really? Let me see.

The letter read: Dear Anger,
Sorry to have left you but it had to be done. We know that you will have to go through some hardships but we know you will get through them. Remember never to give in to the darkness and always stay strong. Theres not much we could do anymore but we give you this with all the strength we have left.
Love,
Mom and Dad


Then all of a sudden the letter started to glow an a VERY bright light shot out. POOF a very fine crafted weapon started to hover slowly into Anger's hand. The weapon was a cross between Anger's Zanpaktou and a keyblade........


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Re: New story

Post by Sweepy on Tue Feb 24, 2009 9:40 pm

Sweepy "Its got to be one of the most beautifully crafted blades I have seen in my entire life..."
Freeman "I can see that part of the design is taken from the Oathkeeper and Ultima....but what about the zanpaktou part? Im not that accustomed to them yet, not even my own."
Anger "The design is taken from Ichigo and Rukia...Tensa Zangetsu (Heavenly Chain Cutting the Moon) and Sode No Shirayuki (Sleeve's White Snow)"
Sweepy "You now have a power that is over light and darkness...its more like my zanpaktou. Being of yet neither light nor dark"
Freeman "And your parents have trusted you with this power, though I think they expected you to find it, not us"
Anger "Ya but without you, even if I had found it, would I have the strength and the resolve to use such a blade?"
Sweepy "I think you would have fought with your heart. You would have done what was right and necesary..."
Anger "Thanks guys...now Sweepy!"
Sweepy "...Damn!"

Anger slashed out with his new sword faster than he normally could but since Sweepy and Freeman were training Sweepy was still in Ban-Kai and still the fastest of the group. But Anger's newfound power boosted his speed making him rival Sweepy. They clashed for hours in the air and on the ground with the occasional interuption from Freeman who used his magic to keep them from seriously injuring themselves. Sweepy dodged the sword strikes but coupled with Anger's magic even Sweepy had trouble avoiding it. Anger's speed was still not enough to beat Sweepy's, whenever he got an opening Sweepy lashed out at it. What looked like 1 stroke turned into 5 or 10. Anger took several scratches since Sweepy has excellent control of his power, Anger normally does but his zanpaktou's and his keyblade's strength and speed was nothing compared to the power of his parents' sword.

Anger "Heh, still can beat your speed"
Sweepy "Ya but your power is even greater than it was before, and you always did beat me in strength"
Freeman "Im tired now"
Sweepy "Ha, all you did was protect me from Anger, I was the one doing all the dodgin"
Freeman "Ya but I had to protect both of you, if I hadnt you would have cut Anger to ribbons and Anger might just have cleaved you in half"
Anger "Im really tired now too"
Sweepy "Eh I can keep going"
Anger and Freeman " Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad "
Sweepy "Ok ok. Lets go help Miu and your Grandpa help with dinner"
Anger "Ok"
Freeman "Agh is this how you feel when you explode Sweepy?"
Sweepy "In pain, exhausted and slightly singed?"
Freeman "Without the singed part ya"
Sweepy "Yup thats pretty much it"
Miu "Come on guys! There are alot of potatoes!"
Sweepy "In that case Im frying some up skin or no!"

Sweepy ran to the house to help Miu while Anger helped Freeman up off the ground when.....

????? "What will you name it?"
Freeman "Who the hell?"
Anger "Nobody?"
????? "Sort of, Im a scholor though, not a fighter"
Anger "Then what do you want?"
????? "Knowledge of your journey fascinates me, and the name of that weapon is all I dont have....."
Anger "Its name will be......"


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Re: New story

Post by Freeman on Tue Mar 10, 2009 9:26 pm

(Hey guys, not that i don't want to continue this story but I want to start a whole new story. I want it to start out as us being normal but then we all discover that we have a power like flying or telekenisis. Then the story will include lots of other people with powers, but of course we will be the main characters. So, what do you guys think, can I start the New Story +.


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Re: New story

Post by Sweepy on Wed Mar 11, 2009 8:29 pm

(I dont mind but I hope Anger will think of something to continue on the story since I left it hanging just for him lol)


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Re: New story

Post by IF~ Anger on Thu Mar 12, 2009 12:40 am

(i dont know what to call it i know how i want to release the zanpaktou by saying "fly with burnig passion PHEONIX" but overall i cant come up with a basic name for it)

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Re: New story

Post by Sweepy on Sat Mar 14, 2009 4:31 am

(well if the release command is fly with burning passion pheonix.......shouldnt the name be pheonix? or something with pheonix in the name like rising pheonix or something or other)


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Re: New story

Post by IF~ Anger on Mon Mar 16, 2009 12:34 am

i guess so so i guess its rising pheonix

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Re: New story

Post by Sweepy on Mon Mar 16, 2009 3:59 am

?????? "Rising Pheonix eh? An elegant name for an elegant blade"
Anger "What will you do know with the knowledge of its name?"
?????? "Test it"
Anger "Wha.....?"

Just then the mysterious old man lunged at Anger with amazing speed. Anger was caught off guard, his adrenaline levels increased causing things to happen in slow motion. Freeman was left behind, he isnt the fastest in the group, he was pretty much the smartest.

?????? "Even with the blade's power your still to slow, now taste my blade"
Sweepy "Not a chance old man!"

Sweepy felt an odd presence and raced out of the house and in an instant jumped in front of Anger and stopped the sword stroke.

?????? "Pest, I am going to test this blade's strength, and the strength of its wielder."
Sweepy "So you can take it for yourself? Go to hell Gilgamesh!"

Sweepy and Gilgamesh clashed in the air, Gilgamesh using Excalibur and Masamune while Sweepy used Tasogare Tsuki. Sweepy was moving faster and faster and faster until it seemed that he was in 9 different places at once, slicing the air with his blade.

Gilgamesh "While I applaud your strength and speed I must really continue on with what Im doing here."

Gilgamesh sliced Sweepy across the chest with incredible speed....but Sweepy threw a white rose at him.

Gilgamesh "What?!"
Sweepy "Blossom Storm...."
Anger "Sweepy!!!!"

White petals slashed at Gilgamesh with the rage and pain of Sweepy's entire homeworld and Anger raced forward to attack....drawing forth all of the power his parents had left behind for him to use....Now Anger is acting with his heart as his parents knew he would....

Last edited by Sweepy on Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:48 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Wanted to add something more =))


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